Wordcount: Daily = 1,403 , Total = 25,803
Percentage: 51.6 (110% of target)Edit: After making this update last night, I then proceeded to write another 700 or so words, bringing my daily total up to a rather more acceptable 1,403. Still below the 1,667 but keeping me ahead of the cummulative minimum.
Oh deary me, I'm losing some of my lead! Not even 1000 words managed today. That's because I got distracted doing other things - like sketching a kowhai and finishing up this year's Christmas bird. It's a cutie, you're gonna love it.
And no, it's not Tiriki - he was the Christmas bird last year - and Aroha the year before that.
I'm thinking that I'm feeling really rather very tired and that tonight I am going to bed before it is even properly dark. That way I can maybe obtain my required 8 hours sleep.
So, not much to report today in the story, except that Tiriki made his first bid for freedom.
As Maxwell pushed
open the door and entered into the cage, Tiriki was prepared. He
perched near the door, and feigned sleep. If he did not escape now,
then he might never get another chance. The human was going to take
him somewhere, and he did not think it was anywhere good.
He waited until
the human was stooped over, crab-walking his way into the enclosure,
using his body to block the door. Then he dropped from his perch and
ran straight between Maxwell's legs.
The human
flailed, trying to grab him, but his big leather gloves made him
clumsy and the kea was fast. Once into the small room, Tiriki spread
his wings and flew. The muscles groaned – no matter how much he had
exercised him in the cage, it was no equiavalent to soaring high on
thermals over the mountains. He flapped onto the cabinet, knocking
all the various seed containers and other paraphenalia to the ground.
Some of it smashed in a most satisfying manner. Up to the ceiling he
flew, circling it, but the tiny ventilation slits were just enough to
let in light and air and certainly not big enough for a half-panicked
kea.
He dove at the
door, thinking of repeating Hiwa's trick with the lever door handles
– but the handles were not levers, they were knobs, and he could
not operate them. Around and around the room he flew, occasionally
dive-bombing Maxwell. The human had picked up something – it looked
like a very small whitebaiting net, and crouched, protecting his
head. Waiting, just waiting.
Tiriki was
starting to tire, when the door swung open. Dropping into a fast, low
dive, Tiriki shot through the doorway, skimming across Josh's head.
Josh gave a strangled squeak of alarm, turning to watch him, and was
then almost knocked over as his father charged past him.
“Out of my
way!” Maxwell bellowed. He waved the net above his head like a
lunatic.
As if that's
gonna catch me.
Heart pounding,
wings thrashing, Tiriki bulleted down a short corridor, past a couple
of hooks, where one of the white coats hung, and reached the other
end.
It was blocked.
But this door
handle was a lever.
He dropped on it
and it swung forward pushed by the inertia of his flight. Pushing him
into another room.
He still was not
outside.
This room was
filled with the noisy chatter of birds:
“Fly, fly!”
They shrilled.
“You can do
it.”
“Bad boy, who's
a bad boy?”
He was back, back
in the shed he had first seen – the ones with all the birds in
cages. He skimmed across a low metal table, rising up over a
glass-topped box, in which a quick glance revealed a number of eggs,
resting in cups. A rectangle of light lured him – the outside! It
was so close that he could smell the tang of spring on the light
breeze that blew through it, could feel it ruffle his feathers.
Only at the last
minute did he realise that it might seem like the door was open, but
it was not. He stalled sharply, claws outstretched, trying to slow
his momentum before he crashed into the wire mesh that covered the
door. The door shuddered, the impact vibrating through his entire
body, but it remained firmly shut.
Clinging to the
mesh and panting with the exertion, his muscles singing with pain,
Tiriki could only stare out at the world he had left behind –
rolling green grass, a small stand of trees. And then the net came
crashing down over him and his freedom, such as it was, was snatched
from him once again.
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